作者:opple 时间:2022-12-04 阅读:()
写好英文句子的核心是:先意识到自己使用了哪些滥俗搭配。
汉语:健康教育不仅可以应对青少年肥胖问题,还可以保护他们的自由
朱诺版本的翻译:Health educationamong teenagers not only address the adolescentobesity but also protects their freedom
今天这个句子我也是用的not only but also,看到大家的句子也是清一色的not only but also, 但是有几个娃的句子成功避免了这个比较滥俗的表达,我们来看一下:
沉迷物化生无法自拔的Diana:
Healtheducation tackles juvenile obesity, guarding teenagers' freedom.
Jasmine
Healtheducation, ensuring teenagers’ freedom, helps them stay away from obesity.
通过这两个句子,大家看一下避免not only but also的一个用法是灵活实用伴随状语,这个是大家之前在群里翻译的时候,老师就教过的。我们今天看一下更多的避免使用not only but also的方法吧~
Plain:they were passionate lovers not only onstage but also after stage
Better:they were passionate lovers onstage and offstage
Better:they were passionate lovers onstage and off
介词短语放在文末,言简意赅。
Plain:outside the cinema, she lit a cigarette, not necessarily because she had adesire to smoke, but because she felt the need for warmth.
Better:outside the cinema, she lit a cigarette, as much from the need for warmth asfrom a desire to smoke
通过这个句子,我们学到一种巧妙的写法,就是把not only but also 换成as much as 因为两者都是表达的并列关系。From可以代替用的很俗的because.句子的灵活性就增加很多。
又比如:
在业余时间里,他不仅热衷于海上冲浪,而且还热衷于上网。
不合格: In his spare times, he not only loves surfing, but also web-surfing.
合格: in his free time, he enjoys not only surfing but also online activity.
不合格句子中,有这几个句法错误:
1.业余时间:spare time 应该是单数。
2.not only..butalso一般位于动词后面,而且当中无需逗号。
3.前后的surfing 重复且含义不清楚。
合格范文只是合格而已,not only but also去掉后,我们来看看结果:
优秀:inhis free time, he is a surfer of both waves and the internet.
其实避免使用not only but also的句子前提是,你意识到,这个表达虽然是你最开始学的,宛如there be句型一样印在大脑里。但是这个表达,实在有些俗套,通过今天的讲解,大家可以从语义的角度,对句子增加多样性了。
enough 的具体用法详解
1.enough 用作形容词,意为“充足的;足够的”,在句中可作定语或表语。作定语时,它的位置较灵活,既可放在所修饰词前,也可放在所修饰词后。例如:
We have enough time(time enough)to finish the work.
我们有足够的时间来完成这项工作。
2.enough 用作副词,意为“充分地;足够地;十分”,修饰形容词、副词或动词,位于所修饰词之后。例如:
Are you warm enough in such a light jacket?
你穿这么薄的夹克够暖和吗?
enough往往用在“be+ 形容词+enough+ for+sb. +to do”结构中,注意do后面不接宾语。例如:
The book is easy enough for you to read.
这本书很简单,你们可以看懂。
3.enough用作名词、代词,意为“足够;充分”。例如:
―Would you like another cup of tea?
你想再来一杯茶吗?
―I have had enough. Thank you very much.
我已经喝够了,非常感谢。
我们在使用enough时,还需要注意以下几点:
1.enough不能与no连用。如:
不可以说
I have no enough money to buy a car.
而应说:
I don't have enough money to buy a car.
2.enough 用作形容词时不可被very修饰,但可以用quite修饰。例如:
We have quite enough time.
我们有足够的时间。
3.can't/can never…… enough表示“越……越好;无论怎样……也不过分”。例如:
You can never be careful enough.
你越细心越好。
We can't thank him enough.
我们无论怎样感谢他也不过分。
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